I just re-read my AFI post. I saw that I wrote that Havok walked out on the stage, like a man walking on water.
That doesn't make any sense.
He walked out ON THE CROWD, like a man walking on water, the people below him grasping at his ankles and holding him up.
There was a wave, a surge or excitement through the crowd and for a moment, he might have fallen, but his zealots stood firm.
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You have some seriously good writing ideas. Great word choice, painting a picture for the reader.
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